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In-Raged!
I was blind so I carved my eyes out with a dull spoon.
Then I adorned my empty soul sockets with red roses.
The warm blood trickles down my sad white doll face and onto
my lovely white dress.

Soiled with semen and tattered by ticks.
I forever question the purity of my sinful innocents. Only once again to be reminded of my own pathetic existence.

And now, slowly my sanity begins to be washed away
by the raging storms that molest the broken hour glass;
for which it rest within my hollow breast never counting time.

For indeed, with one quick turn of the door with no handles
I will open the opened Pandora's box into the chained angel's cage, Lucifer,
and he will rape me of my perverseness
and send me on a realm of continuous orgasm.
Just a simple collection of my thoughts.
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burninggirl Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006
I think this is a quite disturbing peice. Which i normally would of liked. The first paragraph I think is lovely( I tend to dig out eye sockets in my scetches on a regular bases). But the last line is just..if it weren't for that last line i would totally adore this poem.
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stratoskater Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2005
Very creative imagination.....you sent me on a "realm of continuous orgasm"
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MiSTaKiN-sKuLL Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005
what?? like i thought it was a lil sad at the beggining but it totaly went a differnt way but its still good
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Gerbil-jammer Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2005
Great poem. I'm actually going to print it out so I can read it again later. Also, I believe that I agree with most when I say that it rivals that bitchin' icon of yours (to which I did look up the image, read that whole story on female circumcision and was thoroughly disgusted. Unsarcastic thanks.) You should definitely submit more poetry.
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fiercebloodlove Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2005
woah... sick like but I like it.. eerie and disturbing quility,almost erotic disgusted sounding,great job i like it:) ~kaida
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GUNPAI Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2005
yum
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Procsept Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2005   Writer
whats with the whole peice?
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mikomikimika Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004
I like it. Very explicit.
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aboss85 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2004
Gahdamn! nice stuff...:D
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
^^ thank you
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