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In-Raged!
I was blind so I carved my eyes out with a dull spoon.
Then I adorned my empty soul sockets with red roses.
The warm blood trickles down my sad white doll face and onto
my lovely white dress.

Soiled with semen and tattered by ticks.
I forever question the purity of my sinful innocents. Only once again to be reminded of my own pathetic existence.

And now, slowly my sanity begins to be washed away
by the raging storms that molest the broken hour glass;
for which it rest within my hollow breast never counting time.

For indeed, with one quick turn of the door with no handles
I will open the opened Pandora's box into the chained angel's cage, Lucifer,
and he will rape me of my perverseness
and send me on a realm of continuous orgasm.
Just a simple collection of my thoughts.
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burninggirl Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2006
I think this is a quite disturbing peice. Which i normally would of liked. The first paragraph I think is lovely( I tend to dig out eye sockets in my scetches on a regular bases). But the last line is just..if it weren't for that last line i would totally adore this poem.
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stratoskater Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2005
Very creative imagination.....you sent me on a "realm of continuous orgasm"
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MiSTaKiN-sKuLL Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2005
what?? like i thought it was a lil sad at the beggining but it totaly went a differnt way but its still good
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Gerbil-jammer Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2005
Great poem. I'm actually going to print it out so I can read it again later. Also, I believe that I agree with most when I say that it rivals that bitchin' icon of yours (to which I did look up the image, read that whole story on female circumcision and was thoroughly disgusted. Unsarcastic thanks.) You should definitely submit more poetry.
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fiercebloodlove Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2005
woah... sick like but I like it.. eerie and disturbing quility,almost erotic disgusted sounding,great job i like it:) ~kaida
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GUNPAI Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2005
yum
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Procsept Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2005   Writer
whats with the whole peice?
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mikomikimika Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2004
I like it. Very explicit.
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aboss85 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2004
Gahdamn! nice stuff...:D
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
^^ thank you
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aboss85 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2004
:D
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Laurensart Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2004
I love this poem, it gives me a beautiful vision in my head with the roses wet with blood blending into a white dress.....
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criseyde Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2004
*adds to favorites* whoa
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hezekiah Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2004
A vivid masterpiece... Exceptional poem.
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starsaber Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2003
*hugs tight* Ai.
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kuniobean Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2003
Ok, I just got around to reading this and for some reason I suddenly have the desire to tape a pair of horns on my head and paint myself red. Not sure why that is.
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2003
Hahaha, ^_~
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nigtvamp Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2003
Wow...
That's all I can really think of to say. There aren't very many words for it.
But I do love the last stanza.
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nekokawai Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2003  Professional Digital Artist
I'm disturbed and intrigued with the imagery and emotion. *loves*
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angeliceyes Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2003
great use of words, just WOW wish I could write like that, excellent work!!
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strnglitlgrl Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2003
wow...really powerful. great word usage. i love it, i really do. :clap: :worship: :clap:
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kevissimo Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2003  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh..so it's one of THOSE nights is it?
Remember...Lucifer don't wear no protection...

Thanks for this extra window into your world...I think it looks a little like mine.
Well...sort of.

..and thanks again for all your comments.
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2003
Thanks a lot Kevissimo.
^^ Hehe, does your world have people that understand each other without the need to explain with words? That would be the greatest world. ^^ Or perhaps not when they want to stay hidden, but at the same time are still searching. Hehehe, human beings are so strange. I don't understand them one bit. *pokes the humans*
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kevissimo Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2003  Professional Traditional Artist
I wouldn't want to live in any other...

yeah, these strange creatures....these weird, brilliant, broken, dark, hopeful little vessels of grace and madness. I wonder what they'll do next....
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monstrance Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2003
lord, the entire poem is fucking lovely. +fav

*adores your writing*
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2003
^o^ O you made my day. THank you so so much.
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Wyn-- Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2003
i like it too! can i like it too, i wonna like it with everyone elts, i wonna i wonna i wonna
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kattiechan Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
Nice writing.^^
And the illustration would make a nice tattoo^^
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ArmorFelix2001 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2003
Wow, I didn't know female parts could look so...angry. I beg thee female genetia, I mean you no harm, spare this weak man from your cruel, spiky, blades.
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2003
LMAO!!! Have anyone told you how cool you. Well, you are.
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ArmorFelix2001 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2003
This is favorite material...you really should write more poetry. I remember this one anime were this guy created this doll and she died because he never loved her..you kind of remind me of that.
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ArmorFelix2001 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2003
You remind me of the doll. She was very tragic in a sexy sort of way.

yes, write more, one can make a great picture with words as well! :)
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2003
You really like my writing? Maybe I will write more. However though, you rule at writing.
Wait do I remind you of the doll our the guy?
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carlos-teran Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2003  Professional Digital Artist
I love the urgency and strenght of this poem... wonderful work.. :clap:
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oresama-shiko Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2003
Thank you Carlos.
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carlos-teran Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2003  Professional Digital Artist
My pleasure :rose:
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steelpuppet Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2003
Always tears at my mind the thing you compose.
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noirae Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2003
That sounds really sad. You good writer.
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starsaber Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2003
Wow....so much emotion.
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fabianv Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2003
This rocks almost as much as your icon :D
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devilicious Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2003  Professional Photographer
:+favlove:

so deep - so talented - so lovely
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wakusei Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2003
Yes yes very expressive...:worship:
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spicebunny Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2003  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
errmmmm ok.... *ponders*

that was justs ..... pure .... cold .... and sad
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pandachan Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2003
OMG! I love your writing. Its so expressive with depth,and very very good!!!!!! ; _ ;
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defmunky Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2003
love ur writing :) (Smile) u should do a piece that goes along with this...that's kind of hard to do, but it would rock. see, it's people like u that i envy for writing. i can't do it :/ i can do it rarely when i do a really cool piece of artwork, but that's extremely rare ;) (Wink) heh. this is good stuff, i'd love to read more...
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fiouri Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2003   General Artist
That is so awsome!
Oh my god, you're so....so BLAH! I can't think of the words....dammit!Worship
you are a god!
I'm not worthy of thee!
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affirmation Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2003
Love this. Would be better without italics.. it makes it harder to read. But good job.. love it.
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xue1 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2003
whoa...
that is.. really. . expressive.

Heart

+fav
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